March 29, 2011

Like Omigod, Please Don't Shut Me Off

            One of my pet peeves in life is when people excessively use the world “like.” When people say “and then like…” or “like why…”, the word like is not needed. It makes a person sound less intelligent. So, if in M.T. Anderson’s Feed, the feed or neural implant enables a person to become intelligent, why is their word choice so pitiful? I understand the appeal of the feed in that is knows everything that a person wants and hopes for in their life. The feed is also a dictionary, a network to communicate with friends, and information source that increases intelligence. However, I personally can’t imagine living in a world where I am connected to a feednet, as I would feel transhuman.
            In the feednet world, there is no learning and there is no appreciation of culture. Most of the characters do not know how to write or read because they can rely on the feed. As Sven Birkerts believes, there is an issue of language erosion and flattening of historical perspective among students. The characters illustrate this issue perfectly, as they say “like” every other word and probably don’t know about significant historical events without their feed. Also, when the narrator, Titus, is sitting in his hospital bed staring at a painting, he claims that he can’t find anything interesting about the picture. Where is his appreciation for art? It’s nonexistent. All art, whether it is simple or complex is beautiful and interesting. Sometimes it requires deep thought and analysis to determine what the artist is trying to convey through their work. However, characters in Feed don’t need to think because their feed will think for them.


            As I read Feed, I was disturbed when the Coalition of Pity hacked the feednet. The hacking affected many of the characters and the police shut the humans off. In a quote from the novel, “‘We’re going to have to shut you off now. We’re going to have to shut you off.’ And then they touched us, and bodies fell and there was nothing else” (40). In my everyday life, what do I shut off? My TV, phone, and computer. No one shuts me off and I don’t shut off other human beings. It scares me that this could happen in the future. 

March 27, 2011

Project 3 Draft - Generation DotNet

            The Internet has become the communication and information medium of choice. As a result, many American students are less and less able to read and analyze, or to write with purpose and clarity. They have been subject to the “morbid symptoms” of the change to a proto-electronic society where the Internet is capable of conditioning sense and sensibilities (Birkerts). The Net has become our medium of choice for storing, processing, and sharing information and as author Nicholas Carr describes, “a new intellectual ethic is taking hold. The pathways in our brains are once again being rerouted” (Carr 77). The Internet is reweaving our social and cultural web and in turn, it has negatively affected the intellectual capabilities of many Internet users across the country in particular, Generation Y, or Generation DotNet.
            Among the world’s most influential minds, renowned scientists, authors, and literary critics have discussed the potential impact of the Internet on intelligence. In The Gutenberg Elegies, Sven Birkerts fears that our educational systems are in decline, as many students are less able to read and comprehend texts and test scores are falling at an alarming rate. Thus, he describes language erosion, the flattening of historical perspectives, and the waning of the private self as issues related to the use of technology. Language erosion results from fewer students reading books while historical perspective is “flattened” due to students viewing the past with only one perspective and as irrelevant to the future. Also, the connectedness of the Net contributes to the “electronic collectivization” which Birkerts believes has fueled the loss of the individuated self among young people, the loss of autonomy (Birkerts). Similarly, Howard Gardner, a psychologist at Harvard University thinks that the lives and minds of young people are fragmented as the plethora of connections, networks, and messages results in less stable identities in which “times for reflection, introspection, solitude are scarce” (Brockman 276). In addition to Birkerts and Gardner, Haim Harari, an Israeli theoretical physicist, believes that the Internet has made three significant changes to peoples’ thoughts. First, messages have become terse due to social networking, texting and e-mail. Second, the role of factual knowledge in the thinking process has diminished. The importance of factual knowledge has decreased because the Internet enables users to access facts quickly through sites such as Wikipedia and Google. Third, Harari thinks that the Internet has altered the process of teaching and learning. The use of technology in the classrooms “may create an entirely different pattern of knowledge, understanding, and thinking in the student” (Brockman 239). As human reliance on technology and the Internet increases, it has been hypothesized that there is a negative effect on human intelligence. The hypothesis is supported by thorough research completed by Mark Bauerlein, author of The Dumbest Generation, and data released from national surveys.
            In The Dumbest Generation, Bauerlein discusses the effect of the digital age on Generation Y, specifically on young Americans who are uninterested and actively cut off from world realities. As many students spend countless hours on the Web, their level of intelligence is not increasing because “the web is a consumer habitat, not an educational one” (Bauerlein 149). Many young Americans lack knowledge in history, civics, math/science/technology, and fine arts. There is zero benefit to spending hours on Facebook or other social networking sites, as these sites have no knowledge aims at all. In 2004, the National Assessment of Educational Progress found that the percentage of seventeen-year-olds who “never or hardly ever” read for enjoyment had more than doubled from 9 percent in 1984 to 19 percent in 2004 (Department of Education, United States). The more a person doesn’t read, the more a person can’t read and the intellectual development of the young mind will stall. Also, research has supported that children who grow up in homes with many books receive three years more schooling than children from bookless homes. This study, in which parents’ education occupation, and socioeconomic class were held constant, suggests that the presence of books in homes has significant educational benefits (Kelley et al.). In addition, the Chronicle of Higher Education released data from a 2006 survey of college professors, which found that only 6 percent of the professors surveyed believed that entering students were “very well prepared in writing” (Chronicle of Higher Education). It is evident that the changes in technology have led to new patterns of thinking, especially in reading and writing among young people. 

            Why do students choose not to read? Why are students’ writing skills inadequate? The Internet has likely contributed to the creation of these flaws. When writing a paper, students frequently turn immediately to the Internet to check for existing information instead of pursuing new thoughts through imagination. Thus, the Net satisfies immediate needs at the expense of deeper thinking and understanding. Also, the creation of Microsoft Word and spell-check prevent the improvement of a student’s writing skills. A blog post on the USA Today blog, “Generation Next,” said that young people today suffer from “e-literacy,” as “we can’t spell and we don’t know synonyms because there’s less need to know. What smart person would devote hours to learning words that can be accessed at the click of a button? Spell-check can spell. Shift +F7 produces synonyms” (Bauerlein 66). Thus, people's writing and thinking skills are deteriorating as their reliance on spell-check and the Internet grows exponentially. In addition to studies related to reading and writing, the theories of well-known critics and authors as well as scientific research studies have proven that the Internet has affected the neurological pathways of the human brain.
            The Internet has affected humanity, as neurological studies have provided evidence that it can restructure neural pathways, affecting cognition. Even though the long-term neurological and psychological experiments about how Internet use affects cognition are currently being conducted, published research suggests that the Net is changing the way we read and think. In a recently published study of online research habits, as part of a five-year research program experimenters examined computer logs. The logs documented the behavior of the site visitors on two websites that provided access to e-books, journal articles, and other written information. The results indicated that the visitors skimmed frequently, switched from one source to another and generally read no more than one or two pages of a source before switching to another site. The researchers concluded that these Internet users are not reading online in the traditional sense, instead they “‘power browse.’” (Carr). Unfortunately, when people read online, they become “‘mere decoders of information,’ our ability to interpret text, to make the rich mental connections that form when we read deeply and without distraction, remains largely disengaged” (Carr). Due to the brain elasticity of humans, the Internet’s instant availability and overload of information has the potential to reprogram people at a biological level.
              In 2007 Gary Small, a UCLA professor of psychiatry conducted a study with 24 volunteers. Half the participants used the Internet daily while the other half had little experience with the technology. The participants performed Internet searches while undergoing fMRI scans which recorded changes in brain activity. After the initial scan, the participants spent one hour a day for seven days over a two-week period on the Internet. Then, the participants received a second scan and the fMRI results indicated activation in new brain regions for the inexperienced participants, regions related to working memory and decision-making. After a brief period of time the inexperienced participants had rewired their brains, as they demonstrated activation patterns similar to those who used the Internet daily (Champeau). This study shows how quickly and extensively the Net is able to restructure people’s neural pathways. Small concluded “the current explosion of digital technology is not only changing the way we live and communicate, but is rapidly and profoundly altering our brains” (Small). However, as the Internet leads to extensive brain activity, humans may be subject to cognitive overload. The psychological term cognitive load refers to the information flowing into our working memory. If the information load exceeds the brain’s ability to process and store it, the information will not be retained or be connected to other memories. Extensive brain activity may lead to cognitive overload, which prevents humans from converting new information into conceptual knowledge (Carr). In 2005, psychologists at Carelton University found that “the increased demands of decision-making and visual processing in the hypertext impaired reading performance…many features of the hypertext resulted in increased cognitive load” (DeStefano & LeFevre). In addition to cognitive overload, science reveals the actual effects that Internet use is having on the way many of our minds work.
            In contrast to the research studies that have indicated the Internet negatively influences human cognition, technophiles such as Ray Kurzweil and Nicholas Negroponte believe that the Internet is enhancing not degrading human intelligence. A research study at the Institute for Ethics and Emerging Technologies found that Internet use helps humans to develop “fluid intelligence – the ability to find meaning in confusion and solve new problems, independent of acquired knowledge” (Anderson). This research study supports that the Internet and its resources can shift cognitive capacities. Humans won’t have to remember as much information, but will have to improve critical thinking and analytical skills, as less time will be spent memorizing information. In addition, Ray Kurzweil, an American author, inventor, and futurist believes that machines will attain human-level intelligence and humans will become transhumanists, incorporating more technology to become more intelligent. Similarly, Nicholas Negroponte, founder of MIT’s Media Lab and the One Laptop per Child Association (OLPC) supports the use of technology. Negroponte wrote the bestselling book Being Digital and he is a digital optimist who believes that the Internet will improve human life. One of OLPC’s projects was to provide computers to children in developing countries, as Negroponte believes that computers are “a window into the world and a tool with which to think (Trafton). They are a wonderful way for all children to ‘learn learning’ through independent interaction and exploration” (Trafton). As is evident, there are arguments in favor of technology and Internet use, as it has the potential to improve human intelligence. However, the results of many research studies support that the Internet is negatively affecting human cognition.
            Many studies by psychologists, neurobiologists, educators, and Web designers about the effects of the Internet on how humans think all point to the same conclusion: “when we go online, we enter an environment that promotes cursory reading, hurried and distracted thinking, and superficial learning” (Carr 115). The Internet can serve as an interruption system, as it scatters human attention. As people use the Net, they will often glance at their email inbox to check for new messages or stop reading an article in order to check Facebook. These breaks in a person’s concentration will burden their working memory, influencing cognition. In 2009, Patricia Greenfield, a developmental psychologist reviewed over 40 studies of the effects of different types of media on intelligence and learning ability. The studies supported that media weakens human ability for critical understanding and underpins “mindful knowledge acquisition, inductive analysis, critical thinking, imagination, and reflection” (Greenfield). Similarly, Jacob Vigdor and Helen Ladd of Duke’s Stanford School of Public Policy recently examined computer use among a half-million 5th through 8th grade students in North Carolina. They found that the use of home computers and Internet access were correlated to considerable declines in math and reading scores. The online world, which as Cory Doctorow describes as an “ecosystem of interruption technologies,” has contributed to student’s lower test stores (Vigdor, Ladd). Even though the Internet allows its users instant access to immense amounts of information, it is turning us into shallow, easily distracted thinkers. 
             The Internet has negatively influenced the attention-span and the ability to foster ideas among many of its users. As Nicholas Carr describes, “what we’re experiencing is, in a metaphorical sense, a reversal of the early trajectory of civilization: we are evolving from being cultivators of personal knowledge to being hunters and gatherers in the electronic data forest” (Carr 135). As humans navigate the Web, every time they shift their attention, their brain has to reorient itself, which strains mental resources. In particular, the Google search engine serves as a distraction to Internet users. It will continue to encourage users to click as often as possible, as it gains hold of our intellectual lives. “Hyperlinks are designed to grab our attention. Their value as navigational tools is inextricable from the distraction they cause” (Carr 90). It is impossible to be attentive and learn when a person is distracted from distraction by distraction as they click from site to site. As a result, the Net’s abundance of stimuli undermines human thought, which prevents the ability to think with creativity and attentiveness. In addition, many people visit too many websites and receive too many messages while feeling overwhelmed by everything that is occurring online. Many users lack the ability to manage their time properly in the face of this plethora of information. Thus, this makes people constantly unfocused, distracted and less able to complete intellectually demanding tasks.
            “As revolutionary as it may be, the Net is best understood as the latest in a long series of tools that have helped mold the human mind” (Carr 115). Unfortunately, the Internet has not necessarily molded the human mind in a positive respect. Among Generation Y, the evidence cited in this paper confirms that for most young Internet users, “the Web hasn’t made them better readers and writers, sharper interpreters and more discerning critics, more knowledgeable citizens and tasteful consumers” (Bauerlein 110); instead, the Internet may be the greatest enemy to deep thinking since the invention of the television. The United States needs the Millennials to become intelligent men and women who aspire to be strong and wise political and military leaders, journalists, teachers, judges, scholars, critics, and artists. The future resides in Generation Y or Generation DotNet and it is imperative to prevent the influence of the “morbid symptoms” of the Internet in this proto-electronic era.          

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Anderson, Janna, and Lee Rainie. "Does Google Make Us Stupid?" Pew Internet & American Life 
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Birkerts, Sven. The Gutenberg Elegies: The Fate of Reading in an Electronic Age.
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March 22, 2011

Be Connected. Feel Connected. Stay Connected

            As I watched “The Social Network,” I learned about Mark Zuckerberg, ConnectU, the Winklevoss twins, and the history and development of Facebook. What do I now think of Mark Zuckerberg? Yes, he is impressive as a visionary, a great entrepreneur and the youngest billionaire. Yet, for someone who created a social networking website, he doesn’t have commendable social skills. In fact, during his Harvard years, he was an asshole. It was immoral for him to mistreat his girlfriend from Boston University and lie multiple times to the Winklevoss twins. (Although, I wouldn’t be complaining if I were one of the Winklevoss twins, as they will probably successfully sue Zuckerberg for another $140 million.) However, despite Zuckerberg’s past decisions, I believe that he deserves credit for Facebook’s developments and improvements since its creation in 2004.

            Today, Facebook connects the entire world with its 600 million active users. As someone who often uses this site, I see both advantages and disadvantages to Facebook. I appreciate this site because it allows me to connect with friends who attend other colleges or who live abroad. I am able to keep in touch with friends who live in Africa and Europe without having to pay for long distance phone calls. In addition, Facebook helps create a sense of community on my college campus. When clubs/organizations create events, a large percentage of the study body will receive an invitation on Facebook. This generates awareness and as a result, hundreds of students will attend a cappella concerts, fundraisers, guest speakers or pep rallies.       
            Even though Facebook has its advantages in allowing millions of people to communicate daily, the question becomes: how connected is too connected? When I look at my friends Facebook profiles, many of them have between 500-1500 friends. You simply can’t have 1,000 close friends. And there can be negative effects from accepting friend requests from acquaintances or strangers – What if it is a potential employer? What if it is a pedophile? You never know. Unfortunately, some people use social networking sites to cyberbully others anonymously. Or, a potential employer might see photos of you engaging in illegal activity such as, underage drinking and decide not to hire you. It is important for all Facebook users to be aware of the potential dangers in revealing personal information and images on the Internet.   
            Overall, I believe that Mark Zuckerberg has created a wonderful site in which people are able to easily connect. However, there is no face-to-face in Facebook. The importance of real human interaction cannot be forgotten. 

March 15, 2011

Embrace Imperfection

            The Transhumanist Declaration states “humanity stands to be profoundly affected by science and technology in the future.” After reading books, novels, essays, and articles for my first-year seminar Cyberspace, I am certain that this statement is true, as technology will continue to become more prevalent in our lives. I am not opposed to all technology because I use my computer, cell phone, and iPod daily. However, I disapprove of artificial intellects, modified life forms, the elimination of aging, enhancing human intellectuality, and improving physical and psychological abilities. We are born as unique human beings with wonderfully different characteristics. Someone may not be athletic but they excel elsewhere, maybe in the classroom. Dwight Howard may be the perfect specimen of a human being, but even he frequently misses free throws. In our world, no one is perfect. I believe that this is one of the most important aspects of humanity.
                                                                              
            
             In the future, the world may be filled with humans who are perfect. A world where every human being has the maximum intellectuality, physical, and psychological capacities. Why would anyone want to live in a world where every human is the same? The only reason that I would ever support this transhumanist ideal is so that the pursuit to end poverty in third world countries would be complete. Otherwise, I would never want to live in a world without cultural and intellectual diversity, as unique differences and perspectives make life interesting. I would be bored if I lived in a world where everyone was identical. In addition, I question why any person would want to be immortal. Aging is part of the life cycle and I think that it's unethical to alter physical and intellectual human traits.


            Even though I am not a fan of transhumanism, I respect Humanity+. The non-profit is dedicated to the ethical use of technology to extend human capabilities. It supports the development of and access to new technologies that enable everyone to enjoy better minds, better bodies and better lives. In the Transhumanist Declaration, Humanity+ favors allowing individuals personal choice over how they enable their lives and firmly supports the reduction of risks in order to preserve life and health. I think that this non-profit deserves admiration for their commitment to the ethical use of technology to enhance the human condition. However, as these technologies develop, Humanity+ will not be performing human enhancements or be able to ensure every procedure is ethical and risk free. Will the scientists and the companies who create these new technologies act in their best interest or in the best interest of humanity?       

Project 3 Proposal

            As Internet users’ reliance on information from sources such as Google and Wikipedia increases, the deep thinking that enables true human creativity is being compromised. After I read Sven Birkert’s Into the Electronic Millennium, I pondered his concern that in our “proto-electronic” society, negative human developments would occur. Birkerts discusses the potential waning of the private self, flattening of historical perspectives, and language erosion among technology users. Thus, I was inspired to research the impacts of the Internet on human intelligence and on our culture, as I fear that negative effects may in fact already exist. Previously, I had read articles that indicated that the Internet can lead to a lower attention span making it more difficult for people to read traditional books without interruptions. Also, the vast number of hyperlinks and the immense amount of information on the web can lead to overstimulation, which can hurt a person’s long-term memory. In contrast, I have read articles supporting Internet use because it is actually increasing human intelligence. So, who is correct? What is the Internet doing to our brains? Does the Internet have a negative or positive effect on the human brain function? This is one critical question that I will be able to answer after extensive research. Also, if as Cory Doctorow asserts the computer is an “ecosystem of interruption technologies,” is the Internet destroying our powers of concentration? Do the negative side effects of the Internet outweigh its efficiencies? It may be challenging to answer certain critical questions, as it is difficult to find statistics to support the thesis that I will create. For example, I used the APA PsychNET database and I couldn’t find a psychological study proving that Internet use influences intelligence. However, based on the sources that I have found, I believe that I will develop a thesis in which I will support the claim that the Internet does have a negative impact on human intellect and that we, as a society, deserve cultural criticism.    


Birkerts, Sven. The Gutenberg Elegies: The Fate of Reading in an Electronic Age.
            Winchester: Faber and Faber, 1994.

Sven Birkerts writes about the loss of books, literature, reading, history, culture, language, and the sense of self. In his collection of essays, he discusses the connection between reading and the self as he questions how modifications in our traditional way of reading affect our intellectual life. He believes that many people in our “proto-electronic” society have been impacted by negative developments such as, the waning of the private self, flattening of historical perspective, and language erosion. I plan to research whether there is a specific correlation between Internet use and these negative developments. If a correlation is found, the research will support my thesis.

Brockman, John. Is the Internet Changing the Way You Think?: The Net’s Impact on Our
            Minds and Future. New York: HarperCollins, 2011.
           
How is the Internet changing the way you think? This question is relevant today and it will affect many aspects of our life and the future. John Brockman posed this question to more than 150 of the world’s most influential minds. Philosophers, scientists, professors, authors, psychologists, sociologists, and other intellectuals answered this question. This book will be a helpful resource because it will provide unique answers and different perspectives. Brockman’s research will allow me to analyze both the negative and positive ways in which the Internet is changing the way we think. 

Brooks, David. "The Medium Is the Medium." The New York Times 2010. The New York
            Times. Web.

In this article, David Brooks, a columnist for The New York Times, illustrates the tremendous power of books. Studies have proven that children who grow up with books stay in school longer and perform better. In addition, a recent study found that the use of computers and the Internet among a half-million middle school students was correlated to significant declines in math and reading scores. Brooks discusses the Internet versus books debate as the two different cultures foster extremely different types of learning. Brooks' analysis as well as the studies presented in this article will help me to understand the effect of Internet use on human intelligence.          

Carr, Nicholas. The Shallows: What the Internet Is Doing to Our Brains. New York:
            W.W. Norton, 2010.

I am interested in learning whether the effects of the Internet are predominantly negative or positive. Nicholas Carr’s book criticizes the information technology revolution, as he strongly believes that the negative side effects of the Internet outweigh its efficiencies. Carr looks to neurological science to determine the impact of computers, citing experiments that contrast the power of books with the power of the Internet. He successfully criticizes our culture for entering the realm of the Web as it's filled with interruption and distraction, effecting comprehension and retention. Carr believes that the Internet is reconfiguring our brains and I would like to know specifically how and if the Net is effecting concentration. 

Carr, Nicholas. "Is Google Making Us Stupid?" The Atlantic (2008). The Atlantic. July
            2008. Web.

Often, as people send e-mails, scan headlines, blog, watch videos, and click from link to link on the Net, the vast amount of information available provides food for thought, but also shapes the process of thought. Nicholas Carr believes that the Internet is diminishing human capacity for concentration and contemplation. Carr provides examples of people whose mental habits have been altered by the Internet as people resort to “power browsing.” Carr argues that although Google may seem to be the perfect search engine with the world’s information easily accessible, it hasn't made humans more productive thinkers. This article analyzes how the Internet is changing the way we read and think, which is applicable to my research, as I am interested in the negative impacts of the Net. 

Carr, Nicholas. "The Web Shatters Focus, Rewires Brains." Wired 2010. Wired. Web.

A remarkable experiment conducted at UCLA proved that after spending five hours on the Internet, subjects had rewired their brains. This study reveals how quickly and extensively Internet use reroutes people’s neural pathways. Studies by psychologists, neurobiologists, and educators support the claim that the Internet promotes brief reading, hurried and distracted thinking, and superficial learning. The Internet is turning many of us into shallower thinkers and literally altering the structure of our brain. Carr discusses how the Internet serves as an interruption system and affects our long-term memory. He provides a counter-argument in which he states that not all mental consequences of the Net are bad. This source allows me to see both the pros and cons of Internet use on human intellect, which is important for my research paper.  

March 1, 2011

The Loss of Individuality

            As millions of college students, including myself, use the Internet each day to access academic assignments, network socially, read newspapers or play online games, we contribute to the creation of a “proto-electronic” social and cultural society. Unfortunately, as Sven Birkerts discusses in Is Cyberspace Destroying Society? and Into the Electronic Millennium, this society has “morbid symptoms,” one of which is a loss of sense of self.  As my friends and I allow the Internet to permeate every aspect of our lives, Birkerts believes that we are losing our individuality.
            Connectedness and communication are two principle reasons that college students use the Internet. We are more interested in becoming collectively linked selves than individuals, and Birkerts believes that we are in “the first stages of a process of social collectivization that will over time all but vanquish the idea of isolated individuality” (Birkerts).  He argues that in order to develop as an individual, a person needs to spend time alone. However, since college students feel the need to be constantly connected, we no longer take the time to visit a museum on our own or to read a book. According to Birkerts, reading is essential, as a book “constitutes a means of transportation through the space of experience…in the direction of autonomy, in the direction of privacy” (Birkerts). A book will foster intellectual growth or inspire a newfound passion; however, it should not be read on Sparknotes or other online summaries as this destroys the experience. Likewise, Birkerts emphasizes that my friends and I should stop communicating through the Internet and instead speak face-to-face, as “language is the soul’s ozone layer, and we thin it at our peril” (Birkerts). Having conversations in person allows for individual growth as you subject yourself to peoples’ moral, intellectual, and global perspectives as well as their emotional responses. Email and Facebook messaging have no soul compared to real human interaction.


            Are we in a movement toward “electronic collectivization” with a loss of individuality? Quite possibly. How do we prevent Birkerts’ fear that we will have no idea of what wisdom might be or where it might be found in the future? We engage in the experiential continuum that the educational theorist John Dewey discusses in Exploration & Experience. We read and analyze influential books. We engage in face-to-face dialogue with professors and friends. We explore the cultural diversity in the world as we find our passion and our purpose. My search, and that of my friends, cannot be achieved through the Internet.


Works Cited:
Birkerts, Sven. "Into the Electronic Millennium." Boston Review. Oct. 1991. Web.